Gosh you know how to keep someone in suspense. Your stories are great. Finally someone who has stories that are updated regularly and like to write them! Thanx for publshing these for all of us!
They're Great! Thanx! Keep Them coming!
X-com Fan
Well, thak you very much:-) You're right, I love writing them. Glad you like them too.

Keep up the good work - I'm enjoyong reading your stuff. What about adding a few SAS men to show what a REAL elite force can do ?
All the best,
Yep, actually I had planned on including the SAS into the story.

Please add me to your mailing list for the XCOM stories. The ones you have written so far are excellent
First one to get regular updates sent by mail. Great!

Hi Fernando
I put in your page on my X-COM Link.
Your stories are REALLY good and COOL. Continue with it!! :)
Thanks for the link. I'll do the same

Just thought I would say your page is exellent and for alot more hits ask for a link from http://www.gametemple.com/x-com/...
Really popular page and I recomended this one for a link but he requires a request from you.
Ok, I've sent my request in. Thanks for the compliment.

Hey, I've just got into your X-com stories from the X-Com literature site.
Great stuff, kept me hooked even though I was supposed to be working.
Makes me want to go home and blow away some aliens.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks! Give those aliens hell:-)

Fab! Just fab!
What else can I say? Your Xcom stories are excellent. I wait in anticipation for the next chapter to be written which is never soon enough.
Keep it up. I hope this little encouragement will make you churn out more ideas in the coming chapters. :)
Believe me, it is encouraging!

Keep up the good work. Your stories are very entertaining to read.

Great, only complaint is the speed at which the chapters are produced but all good things are worth the wait.
Well I write as fast as I can (I received the game two days ago and practically haven't opened the box!)
Also, I work long hours as a webmaster for a newspaper. Ah, if only I were rich I'd be able to dedicate more hours to hobbies like this one.

This is just to encourage you to continue writing x-com stories as they are great.
Thanks!

Just read the first chapter - not bad at all. Just one thing, A British Merchant Ship would be called the SS Caribean (HMS stands for Her(His) Majesty's Ship and is used for warships). All the best.
Yup, he's right. Corrected it.

Sorry to be picky again.... in the Chapter 2 you describe the ship's interior as being English, it's more normal to use British as an adjective - unless you mean specifically English rather than Scots, Welsh or Northern Irish which seems unlikely on a cruise ship.
You're not picky. Helpful is much more like it. And considring you take time off to do this, flattering!

Hi
This stories are excellent. I read all the stories on (deleted to protect author) page but these are the bes. I hope you will soon write some new chapter because I hardly wait.
bye
Well, thanks:-)

I love your X-COM literature. You are really an incredible "story teller". I love the details, the ambiance, the suspense. I cannot tell how you do it, but it is really noticeable. Keep the great lance going on!
My only criticism is: WHY DON'T YOU WRITE A 100 TIMES FASTER?!!! (I can't wait to see how the sectoid commanders will be oosted out of Perl Harbor!)
(this criticism is actually a complement, not a criticism, I understand you might be busy of course).
Yep, unfortunately I work (too much). Thanks a million for your comments.

If you feel like contacting me with criticism (constructive, I hope) please do so at fsch@elpais.es