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![]() Wish Drama Album By CLAMP Translation by Tara Track 5: 3rd Wish: Yume no Ato ni 3 Translator comments: This is the conclusion to the Wish drama CD side story. A lot of the stuff toward the end was really challenging and I�fm fairly sure I�fve made a bunch of mistakes. Once again, I ask for a heads-up if you catch me mistranslating anything. -Inside the antique shop- *The antique shop door opens. The bell on the door jingles.* Takashi: After you. Kohaku: Excuse me. *Kohaku steps inside* Takashi: It wasn�ft long ago that you last visited me. *Takashi smiles kindly* Takashi: Won�ft you have a seat over there? Kohaku: ...yes. *Takashi disappears into a small kitchen inside the shop.* Takashi: Do you like tea? Kohaku: Ah.. I can�ft drink it. Takashi: Is coffee better? Kohaku: No, um... I can�ft drink anything but milk. *Takashi pours some milk into a cup.* Takashi: Is cold milk okay? Kohaku: Yes. Takashi: Here you go. *He hands the cup to Kohaku.* Kohaku: Thank you. *Takashi sits down in front of Kohaku. Kohaku appears troubled.* Kohaku: Um... Takashi: What it it? Kohaku: The thing I said to you before, was it weird? Takashi: Said before...? You mean about what you�fll do for one night? Kohaku: Yes. Takashi: I guess it was strange... it was very bold of you. Kohaku: I knew it! *Kohaku stands up from the chair.* Kouryuu: Oh! That Kouryuu tricked me again! *Kohaku is furious.* Takashi: Kouryuu? Kohaku: He always does nothing but tease me and trick me! ...oh, wait! *Kohaku sits back down and lowers his head.* Kohaku: I�fm so sorry for saying that weird thing to you before. I�fm not really sure what It meant.... but it seems as though I�fve done it again. I�fve made another blunder because I don�ft understand anything about this place. I�fm so sorry for being such an annoyance to you! Takashi: ...your name is �gKohaku-san�h, correct? Kohaku: Yes. Takashi: Did you come from a foreign country? Come to think of it... your eyes are a pretty shade of amber. (1) Kohaku: A foreign country... you mean from across the sea? Takashi: Yes. Kohaku: No, I�fm a little different. Takashi: Hmm, but you said you don�ft understand much about this place, so... Kohaku: Well, I did come from somewhere. Takashi: From where? Kohkau: From above the sky. Takashi: ....the sky? Kohaku: Because I am an angel. Takashi: An angel.... you are? Kohaku: Yes! *Kohaku desperately hopes that Takashi will understand.* Takashi: ......If you say it is so, then it must be true. Kohaku: It�fs true! Um.... do you believe me? *Takashi looks at Kohaku�fs face.* Takashi: I believe you. *Kohaku appears happy.* Kohaku: Thank you so much! *Takashi laughs.* Takashi: Well then, why would an angel be doing something like you did before. Kohaku: Uh... for money. Takashi: Money? *Takashi tilts his head slightly to think.* Takashi: An angel was selling himself for money? Hmmmm. Kohaku: What does it mean to sell oneself? Takashi: Oh, that�fs right. You said you didn�ft know what it meant. Kohaku: I�fm sorry... *Takashi looks down.* Takashi: That�fs okay. Your life won�ft be affected if you never find out what it means.* Kohaku: But I�fll do my best to learn and study! *Takashi refills Kohaku�fs cup* Takashi: There you go. A fresh cup of milk. Kohaku: Thank you. Takashi: The money you needed... could it have been for this? *Takashi opens the wooden music box and the beautiful melody emerges. Kohaku stops to listen to it for a little while.* Kohaku: .....yes. Takashi: Since you don�ft have any money, let me tell you something. Kohaku: Eh? Takashi: There�fs no price tag on it, is there? Kohaku: That�fs true. Takashi: In this shop, the customer decides the price of the object they want. That way, everyone is able to take their most precious thing home with them, and everyone is happy. *The music box continues to play.* Takashi: Would you mind telling me something? Why you want this music box so badly? -A short distance away from the antique shop- *A gentle wind is blowing. Kouryuu has taken Shuuichirou to the antique shop. He points in its direction while floating in the air.* Kouryuu: There it is. *Ruri and Hari follow closely behind Shuuichirou.* Ruri: Yep. Kohaku-chan is in that store. Hari: Together with the glasses-wearing guy. Kouryuu: What will you do, Shuuichirou? *Shuuichirou stares, his eyes transfixed on the antique shop. He whispers something as he catches his breath.* Shuuichirou: .....him..... (2) -Inside the antique shop- Kohaku: Shuuichirou-san�fs mother sang this.... this song. Takashi: And that is the same Shuuichirou-san who you said you wanted to buy this music box for when you were in the store earlier, correct? Kohaku: Yes... Takashi: What kind of person is Shuuichirou-san? Kohaku: He�fs a good person! A really good person! Um... He�fs 28 years old right now and his birthday is January 31st! He�fs a doctor! Actually, a surgeon! He�fs very nice to children! And to the trees and flowers in his garden! And he�fs really good at cooking! I�fve never eaten it but... Hisui-sama says his cooking is delicious! Takashi: Hisui-sama!? Kohaku: He�fs an archangel. He was always really nice to me in heaven. Takashi: I see. *Takashi seems interested despite the change of subject.* Kohaku: I�fm really indebted to Shuuichirou-san. But I�fm so useless.... so I want to be able to do something for him. *Kohaku�fs facial expression becomes very serious.* Takashi: ...and so, this music box... *Kohaku nods slowly.* Kohaku: .....yes. Because Shuuichirou�fs mother.... can�ft sing anymore. *As Kohaku says this, the tune coming from the music box slows and stops. Takashi: Well, will you please let me hear the song? I�fve only heard the version the music box plays. Kohaku: Well... I�fm not very good at singing... Takashi: Please. *With this, Takashi winds the music box back up. It starts playing again and the melody fills the entire shop. Kohaku begins to sing along with it.* (3) -Outside the antique shop- *The sound of Kohaku�fs voice fills the air around the store.* Shuuichirou: This song... *Shuuichirou listens to Kohaku sing. Kouryuu, Ruri and Hari also notice the voice.* Ruri: Anya! That�fs Kohaku-chan�fs voice. Hari: He�fs so good at singing! Kouryuu: Of course he is. He�fs an angel. That�fs the only reason. *They continue to listen to the song.* Shuuichirou: This is the song... that Hotaru always sang. -Inside the antique shop- *Kohaku finishes singing.* Takashi: Such a beautiful voice. No less can be expected from an angel! Kohaku: Thank you. Takashi: So that�fs the way this song goes, huh? *He closes the lid of the music box.* Takashi: Here. *He holds it out to Kohaku* Kohaku: Eh? Takashi: I�fm giving you the music box. Kohaku: What? But the money... Takashi: I just received the payment. Kohaku: Eh? Takashi: Listening to your beautiful singing was payment enough. Kohaku: Takashi-san... *He puts the music box in Kohaku�fs hands.* Takashi: I have no regrets. Take it. *Kohaku hugs the music box tightly.* Kohaku: Thank you so much! *Kohaku bows deeply.* Kohaku: I�fm going home to give this to Shuuichirou-san! *Kohaku begins to leave the shop, but Takashi calls out to him.* Takashi: Kohaku-san Kohaku: Yes? *Kohaku turns to answer.* Takashi: Why do you want to give something to Shuuichirou-san? Kohaku: ...why...? Takashi: Is it because he is kind, and a nice person? Kohaku: Yes. Takashi: But to you, Shuuichirou-san is much more than just a nice person, isn�ft he? Kohaku: ............... *Kohaku�fs eyes turn toward the music box.* Kohaku: Shuuichirou-san�fs mother... Hotaru-san said the same thing.... Takashi: As an angel, you should be willing to give something to everyone. However, is the feeling of wanting to give something to Shuuichirou-san the same as the way you feel for everyone else? Kohaku: I think it�fs different... but I still don�ft really understand why. *Takashi smiles.* Takashi. You will understand soon. I�fm sure of it. -Outside the shop- *Kohaku leaves the antique shop carrying the music box.* Hari: Ah! It�fs Kohaku-chan! Ruri: His clothes are still on! Nothing happened!? Kouryuu: What a boring guy! He didn�ft do anything even after I went through all that trouble creating an interesting situation! *Kouryuu is burning up with anger. Kohaku notices Shuuichirou and the others.* Kohaku: Shuuichirou-san! *He runs toward them.* Kohaku: Shuuichirou-san, are you out for a walk? Shuiichirou: No....... *Kohaku notices Kouryuu flying next to Shuuichirou.* Kohaku: Ah! Kouryuu! Are you telling lies again? Kouryuu: You�fre the deceptive one. Kohaku: Takashi-san is a good person, so I was fine. Still, that was a troublesome gamble you made me take! *Kohaku is angry.* Shuuichirou: Troublesome? Kohaku: Kouryuu told me that if I wanted money, I�fd have to ask people walking on the streets to buy me for a night! Shuuichirou: ............................ Kouryuu: You were dumb for believing me! Kohaku: But! Kouryuu was...! Kouryuu: You want to learn about the human world properly, don�ft you? Kohaku: I already am! Shuuichirou: ....hey. *The previously dumbfounded and speechless Shuuichirou speaks up to grab their attention.* Shuuichirou: If you needed money you could have asked me. It really wouldn�ft matter to me, so... Kohaku: I-I�fm sorry. I thought it would trouble you, so... *Shuuichirou lets out a sigh.* Shuuichirou: ...what did you want? Kohaku: It�fs okay! Takashi-san is a good person, so he already gave it to me! Kouryuu: I bet it wasn�ft free. (4) Ruri & Hari: Yeah! Yeah! *They stand and agree in unison.* Kohaku: It wasn�ft scary! He gave it to me after I sang for him. *He hands the music box to Shuuichirou.* Kohaku: Here! *Shuuichirou opens the music box and is greeted by a melody he knows well.* Shuuichirou: This is... *Kohaku looks worried.* Kohaku: ...you don�ft like it? Shuuichirou: ...that�fs not it. *Shuuichirou pats Kohaku on the head. Ruri and Hari jump happily up and down.* Ruri: Hey! Hey! Shuuichirou is petting Kohaku! Hari: I want some of that too! Kouryuu: You guys are MY minions you know! Hari: But Shuuichirou�fs pettings feel so good! Ruri: Meowmeow! Kohaku: Oh right! I should thank Takashi-san! *Kohaku turns around. He looks around, but sees nothing in the spot where the shop should be.* Kohaku: H....huh....? The store... Shuuichirou: ...it disappeared.... Kouryuu: That�fs impossible! It was just right there! Ruri & Hari: We saw it too! *Kohaku runs over to the place were the store was, but can�ft find anything.* Kohaku: It can�ft be...! Takashi-san! *Kohaku call out, but nobody answers. The only sound he hears is the soft blowing of the wind.* -On a branch of a nearby tree from which Kohaku and the others can be seen- Takashi: Looks like I�fve surprised them. Kokuyou: Yeah. Your shop suddenly disappeared. Takashi: Ahahahaha! *Tahashi laughs, highly amused.* Takashi: But you two knew exactly where I was. Kokuyou, Hisui. Hisui: That�fs because there isn�ft anyone living in the human world with as much power as what we felt from you... Earth Angel Ranshou. *Takashi�fs body is immersed in a bright light and wings sprout from the middle of his back. He transforms into an angel.* Ranshou: But Kohaku didn�ft notice at all. Kouryuu either. Kokuyou: Those two couldn�ft have ever hoped to do so. You�fre one of those crafty, scheming archangels. Ranshou: Hisui is also an archangel. Kokuyou: Hisui is different. Hisui: Why did you come to the human world? For that matter, why were you in human form? Ranshou (As Takashi): I came to check up on Kohaku. God�fs orders. *Kokuyou becomes displeased.* Kokuyou: You wouldn�ft happen to be using this as an opportunity to take Hisui back... Ranshou: You�fve got an oblique temper, Kokuyou. Kokuyou: You�fre right. I was an heir, after all. Ranshou: What do you mean? Hisui: Never mind. *Hisui changes the subject.* Hisui: So God is thinking of Kohaku? Ranshou: Yes. That kid has an important duty in Heaven. He�fs also a special angel much beloved by God. Hisui: Is that so? Kohaku is... *Ranshou laughs gently.* Ranshou: Kohaku has learned all sorts of things since coming here. Things very different from what God sent him here to do... Hisui: ................. *Kokuyou stands in front of Hisui protectively.* Kokuyou: Are you planning to tell God about us? Ranshou: ...? I only came to check up on Kohaku. I didn�ft see Wind Angel Hisui or the quick-to-accuse Fireball Kokuyou while I was doing so. Hisui: Ranshou... *A worried look crosses Hisui�fs face, but it soon reverts back to a smile.* Hisui: Thank you. Ranshou: But the other archangels�f situation is not the same. Hisui, the Fire Angel has a quick temper, and he has special feelings for you... Hisui: I�fm not an angel anymore... Ranshou: ...but you appear to be happy. Hisui: Yes. Ranhou: ...how very reckless, Hisui. Kokuyou: Who�fs reckless? Ranshou: Ahahahaha! *Ranshou spreads his wings and prepares to take off.* Ranshou: I will soon return to Heaven. Oh yes, Kohaku should continue his study of the human world. That is, as long as he isn�ft eaten up by a bad person like you. *Kokuyou is highly offended.* Kokuyou: How am I a bad person! *Ranshou flies up into the sky, laughing heartily.* -In the spot where the shop was- *Everyone is confused.* Kohaku: The store... I�fm sure it was here! *Shuuichirou puts a hand on Kohaku�fs shoulder.* Shuuichirou: You looked everywhere but still didn�ft find any traces. There�fs nothing else you can do about it. Kohaku: But! Shuuichirou: What happened was very strange, but we should be used to things like this by now. *He stands in front of Kohaku.* Shuuichirou: ...besides, I already received the gift. Thank you. *Kohaku is amazingly happy.* Kohaku: Shuuichirou-san! *Shuuichirou opens the music box and Hotaru�fs song emerges again.* Kohaku: Someday... Shuuichirou: Hm? Did you say something? Kohaku: ...no. *He hugs the music box* Kohaku: [I truly want to become... the angel that can grant your wish...] *The song of the music box continues until the end of the track.* THE END! 1. From personal experience, I can say that Japanese people do tend to pay a considerable amount of attention to foreigners�f eyes if they are a color other than dark brown/black. He�fs saying here that he should have known Kohaku was a foreigner because his eyes don�ft look Japanese. 2. Actually, Shiuuichirou says �gaitsu�h which means �gthat person�h and is referring to Kohaku. Since it�fs fairly important to the manga that Shuuichirou never actually says Kohaku�fs name until after he confesses his love, I couldn�ft translate it as Shuuichirou simply saying �gKohaku�h. In any case, it�fs the same as Shuuishirou wistfully calling out to Kohaku without actually saying his name. 3. The song that Kohaku sings here is Yume no Ato ni ~For Hotaru. You can find the lyrics and translations to this and other songs from the Wish soundtrack on this website: www.geocities.usyaginopeiji.com/yume_hotaru.html 4. He actually says something more to the effect of �git was scarier than free�h implying that Kohaku paid for the music box with sex. I couldn�ft think of a suggestive way to translate this that involved the word �gscary�h, so I left it out. 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