Golden Sun story is the part of the site
where you get to write a chapter of a story. I'll begin with
chapter 1 and you guys write the next chapter. Only one
chapter will be selected so please don't get mad if yours
isn't selected. I'll probably set up a page of the chapters
that werent chosen. It'll keep going until the story is over,
then another will be posted up :)
If you want to try and write up a chapter
then write it then send it to me at rinkukun@isot.com.
Golden Sun: Evil is Reborn
Chapter 1
Isaac was visiting Mia at Imil. It was 11:45
at night and Isaac was running back home before his cerfew. He
knew that if he didn't make it back in time he'd have to mow
the yard with his blade. The earth adept was running as fast
he could until two mysterious people stood in his way. Isaac
couldn't see them cause it was too dark. "Can I help you
two?", Isaac said. And without one second to lose one of
the people speeded to Isaac and punched him in the stomach.
"Aahh! What did you do that for?!", Isaac muttered.
The second one walked up to Isaac and lit a torch.
"Saturos and Menardi?! It's not possible! I defeated you
two!"
Chapter by Rinkukun
rinkukun@isot.com
Chapter 2
"It's possible, you little boy,"
said Menardi, smiling her evil grin. "Yes. What's not
possible is you defeating us!" said Saturos. Isaac
realized what a threat these two were. He remembered defeating
them, and how it had taken Ivan, Mia, and Garet to beat them
as well. Isaac took out his sword. He stared at the two Fire
Adepts, as though it were all a dream and he could wake up
soon. Saturos grinned. "Well, you seem anxious, now,
don't you?" "What do you guys want? The lighthouses
have been lit!" yelled Isaac. He held his sword up and
pointed the tip at Menardi. "Ah, but we want something
else," said Saturos. "That little traitor, Felix,
must pay." With that, Saturos jumped toward Isaac. Isaac
responded by leaping backwards, only to back into Menardi.
Isaac was baffled. "How did you-" Menardi raised her
hand. About twenty fireballs appeared, and all of them struck
Isaac. Isaac staggered. He used his sword for balance, but a
swift blow to the head sent him down. Saturos kicked him
again, and Isaac hit the ground. As the dust of the ground
settled, Isaac lay unconcious as Saturos raised his blade over
him.
Chapter by Jontoy64
Jontoy64@aol.com
Chapter 3
Saturos's blade was lowered to Issac. Then, a
voice called out " Stun Voltage! " A stream of
lightning hit Saturos making him retreat his blade from Issac.
Mia stood before her friend. " Ply. " she said.
Soon, Issac's wounds were gone. " Thanks Mia. " said
Issac. " Not a problem. " said Mia. " Now what
are they doing here? " " That's exactly what I want
to know. " said Issac. " Fools! We can never be
defeated! We are now invincible! " shouted Menardi.
" You said that before and look where that got you!
" said Issac. " Insolent brat... taste some of this,
you pathetic fool! " said Saturos. A stream of fire
appeared knocking the two back. Then, a man draped in black
robes appeared from the sky. Saturos and Menardi bowed before
him. " Master... " they said. The figure stood
before Issac and Mia. " Are these the children? "
asked the figure. " These are two of them, the Venus
Adept and the Mercury Adept. The Mars one resides in Vale. The
Jupiter one however we do not know where to find him... but we
will kill him next! " said Menardi. " No... Ivan!
" shouted Mia. " You scum! " shouted Issac.
" How DARE YOU! Watch your tongue in front of Hades,
Pluto Adept! " said Saturos.
Chapter by Maxvelocity4
Maxvelocity4@aol.com
Chapter 4
"Pluto Adept?" asked Isaac, his eyes
glaring with curiosity."Yes the one and only Hades, the
master of the dark forces of alchemy," answered Satoros,
"Master show them your powers." Then Hades threw
down his cloak revealing his true natue, a monster in the
face. "What the....." said Mia as she looked into
the horrible face. Then Hades took out his sword and started
to run towards Isaac. "You all will die tonight
fool," said the dark figure. He stopped just if front of
Isaac. His sword turned almost black. "By the poison of
my sword you will die!" he yelled. He lifted his sword in
the air swinging down with all his might. "Master, a
figure approaching from the north," said Menardi, "theres
two, on horses, I have a feeling they are not stopping."
Hades turned his back on Isaac and looked at the upcoming
figures. The ground began to quake. The source was from behind
Hades. Isaac was making the ground shake, it became harder,
another man behind Isaac came out of the shadows, it was
Felix, "I will not follow you anymore Hades!" yelled
Felix. "Why have you forsaken me Felix," said Hades,
"I taught you well." "You are pure evil, thats
why you look like you do." Nobody was paying any
attention to the oncoming figures. They were now off their
horses and running towards Isaac and company. "In the
name of the Pluto Adepts!" yelled one of them. "And
with the power of chi," yelled the other. "I command
you to stop said the first one." "Brother?"
said Hades with fear in his voice. "Yes it is me,
Neely." He was the oppisite of his brother, his face
shined with beauty. He had a black robe. His silver hair was
fixed like Felix's. His silver eyes shone. "You will not
escape from me this time Hades." Then the other man
spoke. He pulled out his samurai. He was a ninja in appearence.
"I am not an adept, I am Levi, a warrior of chi, you
killed my father and you and your men will pay!"
"Not without a fight," said Hades. More horses came
from the south. "My men are coming, you were foolish to
come here," said Hades. "But they will have my
help," said the boy coming from behind, it was Ivan.
Standing next to him was another adept, Garet."And me
too," he said. "You are all fools," said
Satoros, "you will pay!"
Chapter by Airik
caffeineloaded3@hotmail.com
Chapter 4
The battle is about to begin, Garet, Ivan
Isaac, Mia and Levi are gonna face off against Hades, Menardi,
Saturos and their troops. "your troops aren't any match
for us Hades." said Ivan. "I will blow them all away
in one attack." Ivan used his psyenergy and unleashing an
attack called whirlwind, blowing all the enemies except
Saturos, Menardi and Hades. "Impressive, but it won't be
enough to defeat us." said Hades. Ivan grinned his teeth,
but Isaac told him to stay calm. " What do you want from
us" said Isaac. "I don't want to repeat
myself." Felix stepped up. "If its me they want, let
me fight them." "You don't stand a chance you
coward" said Saturos. Saturos and Menardi ran at full
speed towards Felix, Isaac jumped out of nowhere and swang at
Menardi with his sword. Felix ducked Saturos swing and turned
his head towards Menardi. "Ughhh" muttered Menardi.
Hades stood in front of her and finished her off. "Weak
ones diserve to die."said Hades. "WHY, WHY Menardi.
yelled Saturos. he grabbed menardi, held her against his chest
and started crying. " I love you, I love you. said
saturos. He flew away with his secret love. "I can't
support this, the ones i taught how to be strong and tough all
left me." said Hades. He pointed his sword at Saturos, it
unleashed an enormous force, a fire one. It hit Saturos on the
back and blew him into dust. "How did he do that"
said Mia. "I have no idea, all i know is that we won't be
able to defeat him." said Isaac. Hades towards Isaac and
co. "I don't have any problems with you, but i'll be back
soon, and this time I'll be even stronger. I'll come for a
good reason. Hades flew away leaving everybody breathless.
"I know why he's coming back, he wants to collect the
djinn and the magical stones. said Isaac. "Lets hide
them." said Felix. "Its no use he'll find them
sooner or later, all we can do is train and boost our energy
and our psyenergy, so that the next time he comes, the battle
will be fair.
Chapter by Wizofhoops
Wizofhoops@hotmail.com
