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WATCH OUT!!! MANIAC COMING THROUGH!!! Fanfic Magical Girls
Tuxedo Man's Aid
Author: Luna
Artist: Luna using some SM pics
A young doctor-in-training finds Tuxedo Mask injured in an alley and decides to take him home to practice her operating skills on him. The poor man manages to get away while she isn't looking. Unfortunately, the rose he mistakenly leaves behind sets off Morgan's seemingly-cured flower obsession, causing her to dress up in a goofy costume and call herself the White Rose.
Story: 3
Art: 4-
Music & SFX: 3+
Fancy stuff: 3
On one count of highly uninteresting story, one count of ego problem ("I'm sooo talented!!!"), one count of stupid new character and one count of goofy scene changes, this story is found guilty.

The plus in the sound grade is for supplying a very good MIDI of "And I love her" for my collection. It's just about the only thing of interest in this Kamishibai.

Warning: incoming rant

Okay, some people may not know that pics in Kamishibai need to have a width of 200 and height of 112. But if a bloody pic is bigger than the whole bloody program's window, it really ought to get some people thinking; "Hey, this might just NOT work". SailorMoon vs. Pokemon has pictures 600-700 pixels wide and 400-500 tall on average - which is odd, since the contents are reasonably sized and tucked into the lefthand corner.
But Rini Revenge holds the record: the star background is 1024 pixels wide. That's over 5 times too big.

Another thing; part 2 of Rini Revenge only has 2 music files and some scrolling pictures of 2 edited KiSS dolls. Do you know why the ZIP's so big? Because the author put in an MP3 file. A bloody MP3 file. Look, it says "Kamishibai Stories" there on the index page. And when I click on one of those thingies, I want a Kamishibai Story. If I wanted a bloody MP3 file I'd go and get it on my own.
Sailor Moon fanfics (with some exeptions) are, sadly, the worst kind of Kamishibai stories.


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