Storyboards: Aewyr
Floundering | Embarrassment |
Last request | Leaving a life behind
| Meeting Gares | Apprenticeship
| Beyond land | Savvy?
| Group RP: Search for Information
| Grekan
Floundering
Aewyr glared at the basket before her, feeling completely defeated
by this object made of grass and twigs. The basket was lopsided
and there were loose holes in it. In fact, it didn't really look
like a basket it all.
'No Aewyr, you can't weave it like that. It will never hold water
if you do it that way.' Aewyr looked up at her mentor, hiding her
exasperation under her calm exterior. On the inside, she felt like
tearing the stupid thing apart.
'I'm sorry, I will try it again,' Aewyr said, pulling the pieces
apart and laying them aside.
Ever since her sixteenth birthday, her life had been completely
turned upside down. The older women in the clan had all kinds of
mindless duties for her, usually involving tending to cattle, sewing,
cooking, weaving, and tanning. None of these things she seemed to
have much success with. She knew what to expect in her "introduction
to womanhood," but she never imagined she'd have so much difficulty
with it.
'At least I'm good at one thing,' she muttered silently to herself
as she began rethreading the pieces of thick grass. Her mind wandered
pleasantly to her training earlier that morning. She could still
feel the hilt of the blade clasped in her hand and the rush that
she felt with every thrust and parry. She smiled inwardly, escaping
the grueling task of basket weaving with her thoughts.
'Aewyr, you're messing it up again,' her mentor snapped, grasping
the basket from her hands. 'This really isn't that hard you know.
You're the only woman that seems to be having trouble with this.
We need to continue with this lesson and you are already behind.
Go back to your tent and we will discuss later.'
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Embarrassment
Humiliation flooded through Aewyr's body like a disease, twisting
her emotions into one of the most unpleasant feelings she had ever
experienced. She fought to keep her outer appearance calm, but a
slow flush crept across her sun tanned cheeks. The other women surrounding
her looked at her with the same kind of serious expression, but
she could see in the back of their eyes that they all looked down
upon her. She returned to her tent feeling remorseful.
Just as she sat down on her bed inside her canvas pavilion, an elderly
woman stepped in. It was her mother and she had a very grave look
on her face. She studied Aewyr carefully before settling next to
her daughter.
'Hello mother, this is a rather unexpected visit,' Aewyr said, knowing
that her mother had seen her leave the younger women and return
to her tent.
'I noticed that you left your session early, I came to check on
you.' A bit of concern slipped into her mother's usually level tone.
Aewyr sighed. 'There's no point in beating around the bush. I tried
to hide you from it because I didn't want to shame you. I'm floundering
in every lesson except swordsmanship. I'm afraid I'm a disappointment
to the clan.'
'It has been ten months since your sixteenth birthday and your only
skill is swordsmanship? A woman's role is crucial in the survival
of our clan. What do you expect to become? A warrior? A hunter like
the men?'
Aewyr winced at her mother's sharp words. 'Mother, that's hardly
fair of you to say that. I'm sure with a little more time... '
'Oh, time isn't going to do anything for you. You have the heart
of a warrior. If only you had been a boy... But that is no matter.'
Her mother stared at her daughter critically and brushed a stray
lock of blonde hair from her face. 'You've always had an adventurous
spirit in you ever since you were a little girl.'
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Last request
'I will improve with time mother... ' Aewyr was adamant
that she would not shame her mother and be a disappointment to her
clan. Her mother merely shook her head.
'Perhaps this clan is not for you,' she suggested quietly, watching
Aewyr's reaction closely.
'That's absurd, I can't abandon this clan. I have a duty and a role
here just as much as anyone else.'
'Aewyr, this is a fairly large clan... And they would understand
if you chose to leave.'
'Mother, I can't leave you. I'm all you have now.'
'Nonsense, I have the clan and I'm in my last few years anyway.
I'd hate to see you live a life that you don't truly want.'
Aewyr cringed at her mother's last remark. In a way, it was almost
as if her mother had made her last wish to her and a last wish was
something that could not be taken lightly or discarded.
'Is this what you truly want for me?' Aewyr asked quietly.
'Yes.'
Aewyr closed her eyes and took in a deep breath. 'This is all happening
so fast. One minute I'm trying to make a basket and the next I'm
being asked by my elderly mother to leave the only clan I've known
to live my absurd dream of being a warrior,' she thought to herself.
'I will do ask you as mother,' she said aloud finally
'Good, you have a week to put together your things. I will notify
the clan.'
'Where will I go?'
Her mother smiled. 'There is a man in Camaar. A Sha-Dar actually.
His name is Gares. He's fairly well known throughout most of the
clans... He is actually the head of a clan himself... A clan that
I think will suit you.'
'You've been planning this all along haven't you?' Aewyr asked,
peering intently at her mother.
'Of course. I just needed to make sure I knew what I was doing first
and you're floundering has only proved me right. Get some rest Aewyr,
we have a lot of packing and preparing to do.'
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Leaving a life behind
The week flew by rather quickly. The looks from her clansmen
were a mix of disappointment and awe. It was uncommon for anyone
to leave the clan, especially a woman. Aewyr did her best to ignore
them and conceal the shame she felt within.
'Well, this is it then,' Aewyr said, standing beside her mother
who was tying a canvas pack to her horse.
'This is it,' her mother said, coming around the horse to face her
daughter. 'You've grown up so much,' she said, tears brimming in
her eyes.
Aewyr smiled and embraced her mother. 'I will miss you,' she murmured,
holding back the flood of emotions that were threatening to burst
forth.
'I will miss you too. Well, time is slipping by and it's a bit if
a distance to Camaar,' her mother said, brushing the tears from
her wrinkled cheeks. Aewyr nodded gravely and turned to mount her
horse. She looked out to the stretch of canvas tents and pavilions
that had been her home for so long then down at her mother. She
took her mothers hand in her own. 'Be well mother,' Aewyr said and
then kicked her horse forward.
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Meeting Gares
It took quite some time for Aewyr to arrive in Camaar. Her mother
had given her general directions to get there, but she found it
a bit more complicated to find it than she expected. She had never
been anywhere else other than roaming the vast plains of Algaria,
let alone see what a city looked like.
'Well, here we are,' she mumbled, looking around at the people bustling
through the streets. She hopped down from her horse and clasped
the reigns in her hands. She studied the street warily, unsure of
what to make of this solid place.
'You seem a bit lost, do you need help finding something?'
Aewyr spun around to find a rather tall man with black hair and
gleaming armor standing behind her.
'Oh, well, I'm new here,' Aewyr explained. 'In fact, I've never
even been to a city.' She looked around at all the people a bit
hopelessly. 'Well, I guess it would be useless to ask if you know
a man named Gares. There are too many people here to keep track
of anyone.'
The man smiled at her. 'Well, today is your lucky day then. I am
the man you're looking for,' he said, bowing politely.
Aewyr's eyes widened and she bowed deeply. 'A Sha-Dar! I must look
like a total idiot!' she yelled silently in her head.
'Here, your horse is weary and you look like you could use some
rest. Come with me to my hall. We will discuss why you were looking
for me there,' he said, taking the reins of her horse and turning
down the street.
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Apprenticeship
Aewyr's time so far in her new clan was pleasant although confusing.
She was used to a nomadic lifestyle, not something so permanent
like a city. She spent a lot of time milling about Camaar trying
to find out exactly what it was about cities that made them so attractive
to so many people. She still didn't quite understand it. She saw
drunkards stumbling about, thieves snatch gold from unsuspecting
by passers, merchants flick their fingers at each other nervously
and all sorts of other dishonest business. But, it wasn't all so
bad. She was comforted by the children who ran around laughing and
the people who had a story to tell and a helping hand. She had a
lot to learn about the world and she was pleased to know it wasn't
completely corrupted.
After she felt a little more comfortable with city life and was
settled in she sought out Gares. It took her a long time to coax
herself into doing it since he was very intimidating. She needed
a mentor and she was extremely pleased when he agreed to teach her.
Aewyr got rather cocky about, being trained by a Sha-Dar and all,
but that soon passed on their first day of training. It's a wonder
that she was able to get out of bed at all the next day, but Gares
was very adamant that she shake off and get up. She wasn't in any
condition to protest, so each morning she dragged herself out of
bed for another day of training.
Aewyr brushed aside a stray lock of blonde hair from her sweaty
brow and struggled to catch her breath. 'I'm exhausted,' she said
hoarsely.
'Do you wish to end your training for the day?' Gares asked, lowering
his blade slightly. Aewyr paused to catch her breath and wipe the
sweat from her eyes before responding.
'I'm afraid there is nothing left in me for today,' she said, giving
him a tired smile. She turned the point of her saber to the earth
and rested her weight on the hilt.
'You shouldn't relax your muscles so abruptly,' he commented as
he sheathed his blade and began stretching his muscles.
Aewyr sighed and forced herself back into a standing position, ignoring
her protesting muscles. She sheathed her saber and began stretching
her tired arms. She winced as the muscles pulled and sent a searing
pain through her body.
'No, don't do it like that. You need to ease your muscles into a
stretch. Extend your arms like so until it begins to hurt and then
hold it for a few seconds. Release and then stretch again, pushing
yourself a little further each time. This will make it so you don't
strain your muscles and will also keep you flexible. Flexibility
is a key advantage in combat,' he stated in a rather matter-of-fact
tone. He pulled her arms behind her, holding her together and began
pushing her arms upward.
She winced again and sucked in a sharp breath of air as her muscles
pulled. 'You need to tell me when your muscles tighten otherwise
I don't know when to stop,' he said, holding her arms in place and
then releasing. He eased her arms up once more, pushing a little
further.
'Tomorrow we will work on defensive moves. Your fighting style is
much too aggressive. In a situation where your opponent outmatches
you, your best bet is relying on defense moves. For now, you should
get some rest. Your muscles will need it. They will feel very stiff
tomorrow, but the best way to relax them is to work through it.
We have a lot of work ahead of us.'
Aewyr nodded, rubbing at the muscles of her arms. 'Thanks,' she
muttered quietly. She watched Gares leave the training area and
sighed wearily. 'I don't know how I'm going to survive this training,
' she mumbled as the achs of her weary body fully settled in. Wiping
the sweat off her brow once more, she left the chambers and retired
for the evening.
Months passed and Aewyr slowly made progress under her training
with Gares. She found that rolling out of bed in the morning because
less and less painful. She learned more than she thought possible
about swordsmanship and fighting.
'Well Aewyr,' Gares began on one late evening in the training hall
as they were finishing up her training, 'This is as far as I'll
train you. One thing about being warrior is developing your own
styles and techniques and I think it's time to learn that for yourself.'
Aewyr couldn't help but frown. She could probably go on training
for years if she had it her way, but she knew he was right. 'Well
then, my thanks for taking me this far. I couldn't have made this
much progress without you,' she said. It was an unusually sentimental
statement for her to make, but she imagined she would see less and
less of Gares after this and wanted to be sure he knew she was grateful.
He smiled warmly. 'I also think it's time you start to meet the
rest of the clan. You've spent a lot of time with me but there are
other members here. One of the best parts of a clan is the people
within it. Besides, you have more to learn than just swordsmanship.
There's a whole world out there you haven't seen yet.'
'I know, I suppose I'm a bit shy,' Aewyr mumbled, absently scratching
her head. 'Well, thanks again.' She turned and left the training
hall.
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Beyond land
Aewyr was quite pleased with her time spent training with Zhuntah.
It gave her an opportunity to meet someone else and work on her
skills. He proved to be quite a challenge on the training field,
but off the field he made good company.
After their sessions had ended, Aewyr decided to take a break from
training and explore more of Camaar... specifically the docks. She
wasn't really all that familiar with the sea other than how it made
the air stink of fish and salt, which often led her into bouts of
nausea. But despite its unpleasant rancor, she thought she would
make a point to gain a better understanding of the sea.
The heel of her boots clattered loudly on the creaky wooden docks
as she entered upon the port of Camaar. Dirty looking men were milling
about, most of them hauling large crates or stumbling around in
drunken stupors. Aewyr's stomach churned a little each time the
men walked passed her. They all gave off a foul odor that clearly
revealed that they hadn't seen a bath for ages and the words that
came out of their mouth were equally lewd. She stopped at the very
edge of a fairly vacan’t dock to look out into the distance.
The blue waters tumbled about lazily, occasionally sending a light
spray of water upon the dock. Seagulls flew overhead, squawking
at each other noisily and occasionally sending droppings upon unsuspecting
sailors. Aewyr chuckled lightly and then sighed heavily. She decided
that there we nothing particularly interesting about the sea...
until her eyes fell upon a massive ship. Now that looked interesting.
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Savvy?
'What are ye doin' thar?'
Aewyr's head poked up from behind a mast and she peered around at
the voice. She had crept aboard one of these fascinating contraptions
and decided to have a look around. She looked up at a grubby looked
man who obviously hadn't seen a bath for weeks... Perhaps even months.
He had a protruding jaw that reminded her of a horse's muzzle and
his breath reeked of ale.
'I'm sorry, I was just having a look around,' Aewyr said innocently
and walking around from the mast she was perched behind. 'I find
it all quite interesting.'
'Well, be interest'd somewheres else. I got me a load to be sendin'
out soon and I won' be taken' any passengers,' he grumbled, gesturing
for her to leave the boat.
Another sailor approached behind him and was stumbling around, quite
obviously drunk, and making some obscene remarks. Aewyr couldn't
really understand what he was really trying to say underneath all
the lewd comments, but it made the first sailor quite angry. Then,
to Aewyr's shock, the two men started brawling. They were both fairly
heavy set men and looked to be about evenly matched. The pushed
and tugged and punched and kicked and all continued on with all
sorts of useless beatings.
'That's enough,' Aewyr shouted, slapping the flat side of her sword
against the drunken man's belly. He reeled backwards and winced
at the stinging blow. She knocked the other man with the hilt of
her other sword on the back of the end and stared at them critically.
'You're being absolutely ridiculous,' she said with a disgusted
sigh. Just as she finished her last statement, the drunken man pulled
himself up and unsheathed a flimsy looking sword that had rust spots
dotting the blade. Aewyr grimaced. 'I won't kill a drunken man you
know... Not really fair after all. But I will teach you to mind
your manners.'
The two circled around the boat for a good few minutes before anyone
made a move. Aewyr let the drunken man have at it for a while, watching
him thrust his sword at her, which she easily parried or dodged.
The man worked himself into an absolute fury and then, as if all
of his anger were thrust in this one move, he plummeted toward Aewyr
with all the force he could muster. Aewyr met his blow with her
sword and moved her blade in a circular motion to flick the sailor's
sword out of his hand. It landed with a dramatic clatter on the
deck. She let the man sit in a bit of a stupor before she knocked
him on the back of the head.
'Well, he won't be bothering you anymore,' Aewyr muttered, sheathing
her blades. 'Again, sorry for intruding on your boat. I’ll
be off.'
'I say, ma'am, that is some savvy swordsmanship ye have. I bet ye
could slay a whole army with form like that.'
Aewyr chuckled. 'I had a clear advantage. He was drunk after all.
Anyway, I’ll be off.' She hopped down from the boat and meandered
back to the city. 'Savvy swordswoman, ' she thought to herself,
letting it roll around a few times, 'I like the sound of that.'
Aewyr's adventures continue in "Search
for Information".
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Grekan
As the last bits of light were engulfed beneath the gray skies of
Riva, the ship was anchored into port. Aewyr was bubbling with excitement,
not only to be off the ship, but also because of the new city before
her. Almost immediately after the ship settled, Aewyr scampered
off the ship and rushed into the city, only half aware that she
was forgetting something.
As Aewyr wandered through the city, she became increasingly disappointed
with it. Everything was gray from the clouds in the sky to the cloaks
of the peasants. There was absolutely nothing exciting about Riva.
With a sigh of resignation, Aewyr began to make her way back to
the ship. As she walked, she noticed something perched atop a winding
street, emitting a curious warm glow. She stopped to have a look,
not noticing that someone was behind her.
'You don't just stop in the middle of the street like that,' a man
grumbled sourly after stumbling into Aewyr. Aewyr apologized profusely
and helped the man to his feet. He was an unscrupulous sort of man
and didn't seem particularly friendly. Aewyr eyed him cautiously.
'An Algar in Riva, not too often that we see your kind here,' he
commented, dusting off his pants.
'Oh... Well, I was just visiting. I'm Aewyr.'
The man nodded. 'I'm Grekan. You should watch where you're going,'
he muttered again. He peered at her intently for a moment, appearing
as though he was running something over in his mind. After a few
moments, he spoke. 'You got somewhere to stay tonight?'
'Well no... I haven't really thought that far into it yet.' She
paused.
'Isn't it a little...odd to be asking a stranger if they have somewhere
to stay?' He grinned. 'You've got a strong arm, but I'm not too
worried about you.'
'No, not ME, I mean you! You don't exactly look respectable...no
offense.'
Grekan chuckled and clapped Aewyr on the back. 'You see up there?
That's my Brotherhood. If you need somewhere to stay tonight, you
just come with me. Most of us are pretty friendly and if it suits
you, you might stick around with us.'
Aewyr looked at him skeptically. 'Well... It does look nice. Maybe
I'll just look around, but don't you try anything funny.'
'Well! You're a trusting girl aren't you? Don't worry, I have dishonest
business, but not with you.'
Aewyr couldn't tell if he was serious or not and laughed nervously.
'Well... Okay, but I can't pay you.'
'Don't you worry about that. I have a feeling you'll take a liking
to the place. Come on, I'll show you inside.'
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