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Funneling
There are times when your story is so long
winded that the audience need some time to relate the ending with the rest
of the story. This could be fatal to your storytelling since the audience
cannot flip back to previous pages or rewind the tape. There are also times
that your chosen anecdote illustrates a point in your talk but needs a
little analysis to be appreciated. These kind of illustrations are perfect
in reading materials but not for storytelling.
A story or anecdote would suffer with the
abovementioned situations. A good remedy to these is the funneling
technique. In it you are “summarizing” the body of the story immediately
before the punch line. Funneling clearly shows the link between the
protagonists’ effort emphasized in the bones, and the outcome of the story.
The net effect will be a crystal-clear moral of the story and immediate
reaction from the audience.
I used this technique to emphasize the
essence of the story about the merchant and Anki. Examine the underlined
phrase immediately preceding the punch line. Would it be effective when you
delete that part?
“The merchant stood dumbstruck. The native, who claimed he is very, very
poor and has nothing to give for some glue had, in fact, almost covered
the inner wall of his hut with hundred dollar bills”
In
the story about the numbered joke, strictly speaking the underlined parts
are not really necessary to complete the story but I included it to
highlight the punch line. Without it, the story ending would be too abrupt
and hard to appreciate readily.
“What happened?” Juan asked greatly alarmed. “Am
I not allowed to tell a joke?”
“ Certainly, guests are
allowed to tell a joke, Juan.”
“Is it a bad joke,
then?”
“No. In fact it’s one
of the best.”
“ Then, what’s the
problem?
“Juan, it’s how you tell
the joke.”
The effect of the underlined
phrases heightened the listeners’ interest for the punch line. It sets the
bomb.
The technique is effective for humorous
anecdotes. Many times I was embarrassed after delivering the punch line of
my joke – my listeners simply stare at me waiting for more not knowing I’m
through. At times I had to smile first and crudely indicate that I already
delivered the punch line.
You can avoid this experience with the
funneling technique. Practice using the technique on some anecdotes you
knew. Those witty fillers or anecdotes from Readers Digest or other
magazines can be good materials. Identify one and develop it into a
considerable anecdote using the techniques we have discussed so far. For
practice, modify it till you are sure that your listener could appreciate
it.
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