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Push the button, Teal. Original Art Humor Mecha Multiple Paths Space Case
TL-17g
Author: Shael Jenias
Artist: Shael Jenias
As soon as TL-17g the robot is built, his creator gets shot by Pyris, a guy who wants to take over the world with the help of beanie babies and another robot, Eco. And it only gets more weird.
Meagen's ChoiceStory: 5
Art: 6
Alex-chan Loves This Story!Music & SFX: 4
Fancy stuff: 5
Rebo's Fav Tenchi sez: This Story is L33t Toni's Thumbs Up
I really like Shael's odd, twisted and rather Pythonesque sense of humor. And the rendered art is really something else. If you have a bit of time to spare, go download this. That's an order.
Teal and the Lump of Coal
Author: Shael Jenias
Artist: Shael Jenias
Ah yes, who doesn't like stories that show the true meaning of Chrismas? This time, Shael Jenias presents you just that: The story of Teal, Eco and a fat guy. So if you ever wanted to know anything about the childhood of robots, coal or PMS, make sure not to miss this story.
Toni's Thumbs UpReview by:
Toni Rebo's Fav
This story is probably the best one of the Teal series. It not only has really good looking pics, it... *gasp* ... even has a story, with the obligatory moral at the end. The music adds to the atmosphere, it's packed with jokes and Baby Teal and Baby Eco are just too cute ^^.
Story: 5+ (great, but a little short)
Art: 5 (very good, the night scenes are just a little too dark though)
Music & Sound: 4 (music fits, no sounds though)
Fancy stuff: 1 (no animations or something like that, but it doesn't really need them)
Overall: 5+ If you like funny stories, you'll love this!
Fanfic
Touji Suzahara:
Evangelion Side Story

Author: Ngan Tran
Artist: GAINAX
A retelling from Touji-kun's point of view of the days after he found out he was the fourth child and his first day piloting.
Review by:
Firefly
GAINAX did a better job telling this story. It doesn't really add any new insights into Touji or any of the other characters of Eva. The fight was VERY badly retold. I didn't really need to see that again, especially NOT with the funny sound effects. It kills the mood entirely!
Story: 1+
Art: *
Music & SFX: 2
Fancy stuff: 2
Overall: 2
The pictures the author chose for this kami are a little odd. However, ya gotta give them kudos for adding stuff to the edges of pics to resize them.

My biggest rant: Last I checked, Touji-kun's last name was spelled SuzUhara! If you're gonna write something, at least get the main character's name right!


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