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Cassie Hanaway
Critique Page Editor
Reviews For Mar. 25 Mar. 31
CRITIQUE OF THE WEEK
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name = Alexandra Carres
Poem_author = Cruelness of Death by Andree Halim
Points = 5 points
opinion of the poem and author = The author relay his feelings to his poem really well. I could feel the pain that he is feeling from the lost of his loved ones. People could never know when they are going to die or when their loved ones are going to die. That's why we have to make the best of what we have every minute, every hour, every day.
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name = Rachel E.
Submission_author = The Party by Katie Gaustad
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = I thought this was a good story. It tells a good lesson.
name = Derek Snyder
Submission_author = Deep Feelings by Ashley Robinson
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = I liked the poem because you could really feel the poets emotions.
name = Mallory Lohning
Submission_author = Trust by Jessica Cordova
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = I think that this poem was good because it brought every day problems into it. Trust is something that even your friends have to earn from you.
name = Rachel E.
Submission_author = Emerald Eyes by Parker Lykins
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = There was something about this poem that caught my eyes and I think this is one of the best poems I have ever read.
name = Jenilee
Submission_author = My Dad's Gun by Eric Rodriguez
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = This was a great story and I reallt enjoyed it. You mixed the love for others and fear all into one. Words just can't explain the emotion in this story.
name = Derek Snyder
Submission_author = The Box by Tony Adams
Points = 2 points
opinion of the submission and author = The reason I gave the poet a 2 instead a 1 is because it was humorous.
name = Krista Schluz
Submission_author = Loving me again by Jessica Cordova
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = This poem was very sad. I liked it very much. I feel as if she is in alot of pain and all she wants is to become a friend to her sister again.
name = Derek Irick
Submission_author = Loving me again by Jessica Cordova
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = I am giving the poem a 4 I like this poem. The reason I like it so much is because it tells you how it is to live in a family of divorce.
name = Krista Schulz
Submission_author = Why by Tony Adams
Points = 1 points
opinion of the submission and author = I thought this poem badly represents all of the teen poems of the world. I was disgusted.
name = Parker Lykins
Submission_author = The Awful Smells to Me by Jessica Sayer
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = This poem used figurative language masterfully and with style. She gave her opinion with firmness and creativity.
name = Derek Irick
Submission_author = Why by Tony Adams
Points = 1 points>
opinion of the submission and author = I do not mean to be cruel, but this poem has to be the worst I have read. I think that poems that someone spent maybe one minute on should not be put on this site with the other great poems.
name = Jessica Sayer
Poem_author = In Search Of Ideal by Jim Ciccolini
Points = 4 points
opinion of the poem and author = Classic love poem. When read, you get a sense of what the writer was feeling. Great feelings and the message is clear. Many laterally techniques are used that enhances the reading experiences. Great poem.
name = Kristi
Submission_author = Why by Nicole Marjore Scheet
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = I thought it was sweet, and touching
name = Kristin
Submission_author = Sweet Lies by Jessica Cordova
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = I thought it was good, but you had a few mistakes
name = Andrew Taylor
Submission_author = If Only by Beth Adair
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = I liked this poem a lot. It really touched my heart.
name = Krystal Bateman
Submission_author = Shrouded In Black by Derick Irick
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = it was simply breathtakeing, wonderful
name = Seven
Narrative_author = Reunion Of Tears by Tony Newton
Points = 5 points
opinion of the narrative and author = Very moving and touching; I really enjoyed the "surprise ending" form that it was written in.
name = bruce longman
Story_author = It Can't End Like This... by Gary Gordon
Points = 4 points
opinion of the story and author = It is refreshing to see a story NOT written in the first person for a change. Filled with tension and makes you want to keep on reading to the end. A bit gross though!!
name = Mickey J. Barker
Narrative_author = Reunion Of Tears by Tony Newton
Points = 5 points
opinion of the narrative and author = Very touching story with an unexpected ending
name = Alice Bateman
Poem_author = Evolution And Revolution by Jim Ciccolini
Points = 5 points
opinion of the poem and author = I very much like what this poem has to say. Why does there have to be an 'end?' There is certainly the potential that the world will just continue as it is.... too bad, almost, isn't it?
name = S.
Submission_author = A Loathed Enemy by Beth Adair
Points = 4 points
opinion of the submission and author = Very well done. Touched on a good subject.
name = Derek Bracer
Poem_author = Life by Tony P. Newton
Points = 4 points
opinion of the poem and author = A pretty standard topic handled with a fluid, simple style- I liked it.
name = Jerry Lewellen
Submission_author = Mole Exterminator
Points = 5 points
opinion of the submission and author = I absolutely loved this story and I can tell you, I don't fall in love with every story I see for the first time. On one level the story is just a humorous tale, but it has that hidden meaning level that really intrigues me. Great story Ken!
name = Cindy Sorburn
Poem_author = A Chance by Michele Fritsch
Points = 5 points
opinion of the poem and author = An exceptional poem with a deep meaning. We hope to see more of this type of poetry.
name = Krystal Bateman
Poem_author = I Knew By The Light Of The Moon by Emily Janiak
Points = 5 points
opinion of the poem and author = I Almost cried, and i never cry, it was very moving, and from me, that is a great compliment, cause only the best can move me :)
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