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lucifer rising
by sl bowers
http://www.ausxip.com/fanfiction/l/lucifer.html
SYNOPSIS:
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Reporter Liz Gardener sets out to discover the secrets of mysterious Miami druglord Jude Lucien. Her investigations prove more successful than she'd anticipated.
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NANCY:
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Not a bad synopsis there Ewok! We should probably say something about setting, characterisations, plot, action, intrigue… They’re all brilliant. It's difficult to know what to say.
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EWOK:
NANCY:
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That’d be a ten then, Ewok? Got anything else to say?
Personally I’m not too sure about the ending. I think Ms Bowers had a little trouble trying to figure out how to tie off such an incredible story.
However, it does succeed in being serious while never taking itself too seriously. Perhaps, as with most of these really long stories, it could have done with some tighter editing in some long-winded parts.
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EWOK:
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It doesn't get much better than this.
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NANCY:
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Ditto. 10’s all round. Read this story. The end.
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