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					play time by Tiggster http://tiggsxenapage.simplenet.com/PlayTime.html SYNOPSIS: Janice and Mel have sex on the desk using toys, and order Chinese food. With a very confused dog hanging around. EWOK: OK. Problem. First: what tense is this written in? Second: Mel drinking scotch? It'd kill her! Third: ordering out for Chinese in 1940s Carolina? NANCY: I agree with all of the above. But I do like the idea of giving someone a jacket just so they'll wear it and get their smell on it and you can come home, steal it and breathe it all in. EWOK: Oh for sure, I've done similar myself. There're some nice touches to this story, but I didn't actually make it to the end. After all, there's only so much mechanical smut I can be bothered with at this time of morning. And what's with the dog being called Hower? (excerpt): Mel smiled and gladly took the offered object and began puffing softly on it NANCY: No. Just no. Apart from the phallic imagery, this is just not what Mel would do. (excerpt): Smiling as the kiss was broken, Janice met the blue eyes of Mel. "Well, love, playtime is over. Time for us to retire to our large bed and get down to a passionate night of loving." EWOK: (peering at the screen) Were they using Borias as a translator? NANCY: I hate it, in any case. EWOK: 3 out of 10, simply for the dark green smoking jacket. I like her style. NANCY: I hate it when people abuse poor innocent candles like that. It should be included in the disclaimer. 2 out of 10. (4 out of 10 if your only reason for reading this was for the smut.)