Portfolio Analysis
Use the digital version of your portfolio (corpus) to search for and correct your own mistakes. Make the corrections on your paper copy, because you will remember them better this way, and you will have a permanent record of what you have learned.
You should have the Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary (OALD) at hand. Pay attention to the examples (collocations) and grammatical information in each entry.
I will also refer to the General Index on my homepage (http://www.mdmorrissey.info/). Look under the initial letter, e.g., possibility under "p", relative clauses under "r". There may be more than one entry for some topics. In that case you should read all of them. If you have limited online time, cut and paste the entries into a file that you can read later.
I will put the words you should look up in italics, e.g., possibility. This means you should look up "possibility" in the OALD and in my Index.
I will put the suggested search strings in quotation marks; e.g., "possibility". This means you should search your corpus exactly that sequence of characters (in Word, Bearbeiten, Suchen), without the quotation marks.
Once you have understood how to make a correction, do so throughout your entire corpus before going on to the next problem or topic. This will reinforce your understanding and help you remember the correct version.
Post your questions--but only after you have studied the entires in the OALD and my Index, please-- to http://groups.yahoo.com/group/mdmorrissey.
Paragraphing
There should be a blank line between each paragraph.
Spelling
Use Word or some other spelling checker to check your spelling.
Punctuation
No comma before noun clauses. Look for ", that" or ",that", ", what", etc. Which are noun clauses and which are relative clauses? If "that" begins a relative clause, it should either have no comma or be "which".
Read about restrictive and nonrestrictive relative clauses. Then look for "who", "whom", "that", "which ", "where", and "whose", and decide which are restrictive or nonrestrictive, and punctuate accordingly.
Read about other uses of the comma and look for "," in your corpus. Are they correct? Remember that commas are often optional, and usage also varies with style and dialect. British English (BE) uses less punctuation than American English (AE), for example.
If you want to find cases where a comma should divide long independent clauses, for example, look for "and", "but", "or" and the other coordinating conjunctions in your corpus, and supply commas where advisable. Remember that you can adjust your search parameters in Word (Suchen, Erweitern) in various ways, to find parts of words or whole words or expressions, capitalized or not, etc.
You can also look for sentence adverbs in your corpus, and supply commas where needed.
Vocabulary and collocations
Here are some items to start off with. First look the word up in the OALD and the General Index. Then search your corpus for it. Remember that you may have to search more than once to find all the examples, if there are different forms of the word, e.g., "possibility" and "possibilities", "mean" and "meaning".
possibility
experience
aspect
especially
mistake
baby
mean
become
There are plenty of mistakes like these, of course, but let us concentrate first on grammar.
Grammar
Read
about the major parts of the sentence:
5. Pronouns
and other pro-forms
7. Comparison
8. Adverbials
Now read
about some specific problems in each area.
Here is my Grammar (general contents above)
according to the frequency of specific errors.
The number to the right of each category represents the frequency of
errors in that category (in my sample), expressed as a percentage of the total
number of errors in all categories (1-8), rounded off to the nearest whole
number. + means that errors in this
category are less than .5%.
First
read the linked page. (Download it and
save it in the same folder this file is in, so that you can read them both
offline). Remember that the examples are examples of errors (or problems, as I prefer to call them), that is, of
sentences that most native speakers would not say. In some cases I have starred the unacceptable or problematic
sentence or expression to contrast with the acceptable version, e.g.:
*He gave me an information.
He gave me some information.
Then
search your corpus for examples of problems in each category. In many cases you can use Word's Search
function to find all the occurrences of key words or phrases, and you can
decide for yourself if these uses are correct or not in each instance. You can find many of these key words in the
examples. In other cases, for example,
concerning tense usage, a mechanical search is impossible since you cannot
connect the problem with a specific word, so you will have to scan (read quickly)
through your corpus and find the relevant places in the text yourself. In the last column I will make some
suggestions to help you search.
|
Grammatical Category |
% of all errors |
Look for |
1. |
31 |
|
|
1.1 |
5 |
"industrialization", "capitalism",
"society", etc., abstract nouns ending in "tion",
"ment", etc. See examples. |
|
1.2 |
5 |
|
|
1.2.1 |
4 |
"Finnish language", "death penalty", Easter
holidays", etc. See examples. |
|
1.2.2 |
+ |
|
|
1.2.3 |
+ |
"A", "An", especially at beginning of sentences. |
|
1.2.4 |
+ |
|
|
1.2.5 |
1 |
|
|
1.3 |
1 |
|
|
1.4 |
5 |
|
|
1.4.1 |
4 |
"preference", "condition", "hair",
etc. See examples. |
|
1.4.2 |
1 |
"deal", "much", etc. |
|
1.5 |
1 |
|
|
1.5.1 |
|
|
|
1.5.2 |
+ |
|
|
1.6 |
3 |
|
|
1.6.1 |
1 |
"hair", "heart", "life",
"health", etc. See
examples. |
|
1.6.2 |
1 |
"own" |
|
1.6.3 |
+ |
|
|
1.6.4 |
+ |
"of me", "of him", etc. |
|
1.6.5 |
+ |
|
|
1.7 |
2 |
|
|
1.7.1 |
1 |
"last", "next" |
|
1.7.2 |
1 |
"some" |
|
1.8 |
1 |
|
|
1.8.1 |
+ |
"both" |
|
1.8.2 |
+ |
"all the" |
|
1.9 |
2 |
|
|
1.9.1 |
+ |
|
|
1.9.2 |
1 |
"ing" |
|
1.9.3 |
+ |
"blue", "green", "old", "new",
etc. |
|
1.9.4 |
+ |
"dollars", "euros" |
|
1.9.5 |
+ |
"Street", "St.", "Ave.", etc. |
|
1.10 |
5 |
|
|
1.10.1 |
2 |
"possibility", "problem", "danger",
"idea", etc. See examples. |
|
1.10.2 |
1 |
"question",
"problem", etc. |
|
1.10.3 |
+ |
"hints",
"conditions", "rules", etc. |
|
1.10.4 |
+ |
"ing" |
|
1.10.5 |
+ |
"being" |
|
1.10.6 |
1 |
"who", "whom", "that",
"which", "when", "where" |
|
1.10.7 |
+ |
"more", "else" |
|
1.10.8 |
+ |
|
|
1.10.9 |
+ |
|
|
1.11 |
1 |
|
|
1.11.1 |
+ |
"ing" |
|
1.11.2 |
+ |
|
|
1.11.3 |
+ |
|
|
2. |
26 |
|
|
2.1 |
2 |
|
|
2.2 |
2 |
|
|
2.2.1 |
2 |
|
|
2.2.2 |
+ |
|
|
2.3 |
3 |
|
|
2.3.1 |
1 |
"existing", "thinking", "lying",
"coming" |
|
2.3.2 |
2 |
|
|
2.3.3 |
+ |
"sometimes", "often", etc. |
|
2.3.4 |
+ |
"always", "constantly", etc. |
|
2.3.5 |
+ |
|
|
2.4 |
8 |
|
|
2.4.1 |
4 |
"since", "for", "ing" |
|
2.4.2 |
3 |
"have", "haven't", "has", etc. |
|
2.4.3 |
1 |
"had" |
|
2.5 |
4 |
"if", "when", "would" |
|
2.5.1 |
1 |
|
|
2.5.2 |
2 |
|
|
2.5.3 |
1 |
|
|
2.6 |
2 |
|
|
2.6.1 |
+ |
"shall" |
|
2.6.2 |
+ |
"should", "ought" |
|
2.6.3 |
1 |
"must" |
|
2.6.4 |
+ |
"have to", "had to", etc. |
|
2.6.5 |
+ |
"will" |
|
2.6.6 |
+ |
|
|
2.7 |
2 |
"is to", "are to", etc. |
|
2.7.1 |
1 |
|
|
2.7.2 |
1 |
|
|
2.7.3 |
+ |
|
|
2.8 |
+ |
"demand", "suggest", "order", etc. |
|
2.9 |
Formation of past tense and past
participle |
1 |
|
2.10 |
2 |
|
|
3. |
9 |
|
|
3.1 |
3 |
"justify", "stop", "enjoy",
"miss", "risk", etc.
See examples. |
|
3.2 |
1 |
"help", "wish", "make", etc. |
|
3.3 |
1 |
"make", "speak", "summarize", etc. |
|
3.4 |
1 |
"reign", "disguise", "make",
"thank", etc. |
|
3.5 |
1 |
"want", "make", "have", etc. |
|
3.6 |
1 |
|
|
3.7 |
+ |
|
|
3.8 |
+ |
|
|
3.9 |
1 |
|
|
3.10 |
+ |
|
|
3.11 |
+ |
"like" |
|
3.12 |
+ |
"worth", "sure" |
|
3.13 |
+ |
"difficult", "easy", etc. |
|
3.14 |
1 |
"angry", "interested", "excited" |
|
3.15 |
+ |
|
|
4. |
18 |
|
|
4.1 |
1 |
"for to", "for that" |
|
4.2 |
18 |
"about", "after", "by", etc. |
|
5. |
3 |
|
|
5.1 |
+ |
"myself", "themselves", etc. |
|
5.2 |
+ |
"how", "what" |
|
5.3 |
+ |
"such" |
|
5.4 |
+ |
"so" |
|
5.5 |
+ |
"or so" |
|
5.6 |
+ |
"do the same" |
|
5.7 |
+ |
|
|
5.8 |
1 |
"what means" |
|
6. |
3 |
|
|
6.1 |
Non-assertive forms after
negative words |
2 |
"no one", "hardly", "at all", etc. See examples. |
6.2 |
+ |
|
|
6.3 |
1 |
"no" |
|
7. |
2 |
"as",
"than" |
|
7.1 |
+ |
|
|
7.2 |
1 |
|
|
7.3 |
+ |
"enough", "too" |
|
7.4 |
+ |
"another" |
|
7.5 |
+ |
"such", "so" |
|
8. |
8 |
|
|
8.1 |
2 |
"ly" |
|
8.2 |
+ |
"ly" |
|
8.3 |
1 |
"Never", "Nowhere", "Seldom", etc. |
|
8.4 |
1 |
|
|
8.5 |
3 |
"a bit", "already", "always", etc. See examples. |
|
8.6 |
+ |
|
|
8.7 |
1 |
"for" |
|
8.8 |
+ |
"being" |